(on her feast day, Oct. 15)
Watering the garden of the soul
helps it grow, she said, like
the initial strain of pulling a
full bucket up from a well
gradually becoming easier,
as if by a God-driven pulley,
leading to effortless irrigation
by an unseen hand, and,
eventually, oh, ecstasy—
rain falling from heaven,
no human intervention
needed. This from a woman
who cradled her nephew,
crushed by a collapsed
building, until he returned
to life.
And I see her, this saint,
mourning a dead loved
one, all her years of soul-
tending prayer poured into
earnest supplication, as
women do hourly now
amid the rubble of what
had been their lives,
holding the bodies of
beloveds, praying for
miracles, for evidence
of replenishing rain,
for acts of love.


I love the turn in this prayer, how it points to what’s happening in our world right now. Beautifully done, Jan. The end made me gasp.
Thanks so much, Amrita. I didn’t start the poem with the ending in mind… it just went there… a surprise to me as much to you.
That’s the magic of poetry!
Are you skillful with section breaks in Microsoft Word?