You know how sometimes you
make something harder than
it has to be,
which can feel like trying to
shovel packed snow hardened
into a giant ice cube?
Or, today, like futzing with
a simple poem to somehow
force it to sing
when all the damn thing wants
is to lie there with its awkwardly
mixed metaphors
and trying-too-hard similes
and have a good lie-down, not
struggle to its feet
and scamper gaily across wherever
it is you’re trying to make it dance.
Or sing.
The solution appears as you head
into the gift of a warm winter day:
Let the poem poem itself.
Stop trying to wrangle a tortured
comparison out of simple words
that don’t need fancifying,
which all by themselves trickle down
a grateful page into a wee poem
without any fuss and bother—
like this.


Man! Can I relate…thanks for sharing your “suffering.”
As suffering goes, it’s pretty sweet suffering. Thanks for your kind comment that made me smile!
YOU’RE SWEET…