In the pool

(for Barbara in Lane #2)

I am the visiting one who has flown in
and landed with a gentle whoosh

in this five-lane pond, one who
some might perceive as an interloper,

one who might need to be chased
off by other floating fowl who

think of this bit of liquid as theirs.
But here, this kind one bobbing

in her familiar spot welcomes me,
the out-of-towner, slipping into

the blue of an early morning.
I feel my body incline into

weightlessness again and lean
into the aqueous arms that hold me,

that support us all like a longtime,
unseen friend.

•••

Thanks to Barbara in Lane #2 and Terri in Lane #3
for including me in their early morning Shadow HIlls

lap pool swims.

Barbara (left) and Terri in the Shadow HIlls Montecito lap pool / Photo: Jan Haag
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  1. scrumptiouslyfearless25e4e6ba66's avatar scrumptiouslyfearless25e4e6ba66 says:

    I thought you might enjoy this:

    SWIMMING LAPS
    I hope it’s not cold today
    but with no body fat, it’s always cold
    splash…arggh!
    okay, the worst is over
    I’ll get warmer with each lap
    pull glide
    pull glide
    there’s not a lot you can say about swimming laps
    the scenery doesn’t change
    the high point is flipping
    over and
    going back

    I use mnemonic devices to count:
    one and done
    two for you
    three for free
    four on the floor

    even so I still lose track sometimes
    I aspire to a half mile but don’t always
    get there

    five no jive
    I switch to the elementary
    backstroke I learned in Boy Scout camp,
    and boy was that lake cold!

    six tricks
    the lifeguards sit like herons on a log,
    checking their cell phones,
    trying not to look bored

    seven eleven
    one is a red-haired high school girl
    is it true what they say about
    redheads?

    eight at the gate
    I like to swim alone
    when it’s quiet

    nine, so fine
    when I first moved in they played
    music
    anything from classical to the Doors
    backstroke to Beethoven
    dog paddle to the Doors

    Ten-Ren
    I’ll explain that one:
    I used to shop for ginseng at the Ten-Ren Tea Company
    in Chinatown

    11th hour
    okay I’ll explain that also:
    it’s the final hour of hospice work,
    too late for a pardon but a final chance for
    redemption

    12th house
    secretive, self undoing,
    and the deep unconscious in astrology
    I was born there

    13 signs
    that’s from the poem I submitted
    they edited it down to three signs

    14 Ducks
    there must be 100 rubber ducks on
    the pool deck,
    some wear quarantine masks

    15 fives
    no explanation

    sweet 16
    no, not Chuck Berry but March Madness,
    the basketball tournament

    1776
    no explanation needed

    18 to vote,
    or maybe it’s 21?

    1947
    the year I was born
    India became independent
    and the Diary of Anne Frank was published

    20
    I don’t need any more devices
    I’m in the zone now and just
    cruise the last few laps
    then the big reward –
    a dip in the hot tub
    to warm up

    • janishaag's avatar janishaag says:

      This is great, Charles! Thanks so much for sending it. Is it yours? I’d love to keep a copy with the proper credit on it. I am so with the narrator with the hot tub reward at the end!

      And, if you’re the same Seattle area poet who wrote the lovely poem “Temple of Love” about sitting with a dying woman in the hospital… I want to convey how much I admire that poem and the work of the No One Dies Alone program at St. Peter’s Hospital.

      • scrumptiouslyfearless25e4e6ba66's avatar scrumptiouslyfearless25e4e6ba66 says:

        Thank you! Yes I wrote it, yr welcome to keep it or use as you like.

        charles kasler

        Thank you, Charles!

        Jan

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