Life would be a mistake,
the window says,
as if I need reminding.
Apparently, I need reminding.
And standing in Ching Young
Center in Hanalei, clouds ringing
the tops of mountains behind me
like moisture-laden lei, as I read
the golden-arched words, I think
of my painterly brother-in-law,
the retired art teacher, who most
days puts pen and ink or watercolor
to paper. Or the dear friend who hosts
musicians in concert at her home
in the hills. Or the tropical garden
where my fella and I are happily
ensconced, most every tree
wrapped in orchids blooming
their fool heads off, thanks to a
devoted, green-thumbed woman.
Life in any form is no mistake—
it is the art that surrounds us
if we have eyes to see it. It is
the art in us, if we have the will
to make it, the patience to play
with it, to not insist that it be
good, just done for now. Like
this poem, a bit of sloppy
wordplay that fell out of me
onto the page and—
no accident, this—
made its way to you.


Exactly, Jan. And may I use this phabulous photo as prompt???
Of course, Susie! Any of my photos, for you, any time! Aloha!